I thought your idea was great and the bird thing is quite a good concept. I don't think the birds look cute at all, they're quite scary actually - especially when in a group.
The best part of the presentation was the airport lounge billboard. It wasn't as funny as everybody made it out to be, dunno why everybody laughed...
Was convinced, by this stage, Dragon X didn’t realise he/she wasn’t there to look at finished visuals. Great strapline ‘something is wrong’- Although the group Confused it with the bird visuals.
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3 comments:
Martin >
Missed the idea
Wendy >
Liked the visuals, although the idea was not taken far enough
Sam >
Idea is quite nice but it’s a missed opportunity
Why birds ?
Hitch >
Liked the way it started
The idea stumbled on
You don’t seem to know what the idea is
Amy >
Liked the visual
Good pacing – strong idea
More info required / like context
I thought your idea was great and the bird thing is quite a good concept. I don't think the birds look cute at all, they're quite scary actually - especially when in a group.
The best part of the presentation was the airport lounge billboard. It wasn't as funny as everybody made it out to be, dunno why everybody laughed...
Anyway, good job and good luck with the project.
Was convinced, by this stage, Dragon X didn’t realise he/she wasn’t there to look at finished visuals.
Great strapline ‘something is wrong’-
Although the group Confused it with the bird visuals.
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