Those nasty Dragons ripped you apart! I'm sure everyone felt sorry for you, especially as the idea had some potential. You are always going to be up against it going into competition with games like The Sims which everybody seems to like, for some reason.
I liked the visual element of the piece and would have liked to see how it would have turned out had you followed it through to a conclusion. I certainly would have played it. The earning money idea was a good one.
Don't let the Dragons get you down - all art is subjective to personal opinion. Good work with the presentations and good luck with the rest of the project.
It was fairly obvious that Dragon X didn’t realise that they were looking at idea visuals – Despite their research, this pitch suffered from not presenting an original pictorial language .
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5 comments:
Martin >
My twelve year old wouldn’t use this
Not really reflecting your own realities
Sam >
Are you selling advertising space ?
Hitch >
Don’t know what the idea is ?
Racism ?
Amy >
I would not go on this site
It doesn’t look like a difficult game
Those nasty Dragons ripped you apart! I'm sure everyone felt sorry for you, especially as the idea had some potential. You are always going to be up against it going into competition with games like The Sims which everybody seems to like, for some reason.
I liked the visual element of the piece and would have liked to see how it would have turned out had you followed it through to a conclusion. I certainly would have played it. The earning money idea was a good one.
Don't let the Dragons get you down - all art is subjective to personal opinion. Good work with the presentations and good luck with the rest of the project.
It was fairly obvious that Dragon X
didn’t realise that
they were looking at idea visuals –
Despite their research, this pitch suffered from not presenting an original pictorial language .
Ouch! They were harsh, i think they picked on us! We wasn't that bad!
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